FFftPP: Faded Calligraphy

This post is for Roger Shipp’s Flash Fiction for the Purposeful Practitioner challenge. For this challenge we are given a photo prompt and an optional opening line / prompt sentence. This week’s prompt line is There it was. You could see the corner of the folded yellowed parchment sticking out of the torn lining of the battered book.” I’ve not used the exact words this week but I’ve kept the general sense of it. The story should be under 200 words and have a clear beginning, middle and end.

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Photo Prompt – Public Domain Image

Faded Calligraphy

Hettie rubbed weary eyes as the candle sputtered its death throes; the scrawl on the page growing increasingly illegible in the oscillating shadows.

Sleep dragged at her mind.

She’d stopped comprehending the meaning of the words some time ago; had read the current passage three times at least, yet still had no idea what it said. The trail of allusion and conjecture she’d followed to this point didn’t even guarantee success – there was only the faintest chance the author had handled the Treatise. It was possible, probable even, that she was researching another dead end. 

As tired as she was, it hard to tell the difference. It was time to accept defeat – at least for tonight.

She noticed the folded parchment that peaked from inside the torn lining only as she closed the battered text. All thoughts of sleep fled. Possibility danced before her.

Unsteady fingers drew the fragile document free from its hiding place as the candle-flame gave a final guttering flare and vanished. She barely caught a glimpse of the faded calligraphy on the pamphlet’s cover but a glimpse was enough. Excited laughter burbled free. She’d found the Treatise.

She’d found the proof they needed.

Word Count: 199

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11 Comments on “FFftPP: Faded Calligraphy

  1. Exciting story in the end. Glad she found what she needed for proof, the treatise. Great write!

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  2. Cool, I wonder what it’s all about? I hope this doesn’t mean that she’s not going to get the sleep she needs tonight!

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  3. Wonderful story, Louise. You tell your stories so well! I’m so glad she found the treatise at the end. The way you built up to it is fantastic!

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  4. Makes me wonder what’s so important about the Treatise… Great story 🙂

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  5. Wonderfully written. Great suspense built in and the accidental discovery of the paper just as she was about to give up added to the story. Her excitement is quite real in making the discovery of the Treatise.

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    • Thanks, Jessie. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 I spent so long playing around with this one that by the time I finally posted it I wasn’t sure I even liked it myself!

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