Riverboat idling
Amidst the harvest sun’s glee
Youthful dreams recalled
The child’s wants expressed
In wildly scattered glitter
River flowing on
It took me quite a long time to decide what to write to accompany these pictures. I knew that I wanted to express at least one of the ways in which they fit the Weekly Photo Challenge: Connection. There are several of these – the connection of place to place, with the boat and the flowing river; the connection to nature that can be experienced upon the waterways and the connection with my own dream of someday living on a riverboat.
The main focus of the poem I finally wrote is the final one of these, although hopefully there’s also a sense of the others…
Usually when I write poetry it’s entirely free flow but for a while now I’ve been feeling the urge to write a haiku – something I’ve never before tried. In the end, after reading lots of different information pages and how-to guides, I wrote not just a single but a double haiku!
I hope you like it.
Beautiful picture and yes!! I love the double hiaku accompanying them.
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Thanks, Ameena. I enjoyed writing it. 🙂 I’m glad you liked them.
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I agree – beautiful and soothing photo and haiku.
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I’m glad you liked them, Sabina. Thanks for visiting. 🙂
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Lovely Louise! Beautiful Haiku, love the visions and child seeking wonder in each stanza. Great entry.
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Thank you, Carrie. I really enjoyed writing them, especially after being really unhappy with everything I’d tried to produce before! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Love it! So beautiful 🙂
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Thank you. I’m glad you like it. 🙂
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I do like the poetry… a lot.
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Thank you. 🙂
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A double haiku is double the fun. The words were inspiring and the photos were lovely. I wrote a poem today with the same idea flowing throughout but I am not sure when I’ll publish it. It is interesting to find someone expressing similar feelings in poetry. Thank you for sharing your photos and your poetry. x
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I always like to find someone expressing similar ideas and feelings – it makes me feel a little less self-conscious of my own efforts! Thanks for visiting. 🙂
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“youthful dreams recalled”….took me years back 🙂 Brilliant!
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Thank you! So many dreams get left by the wayside and forgotten – it’s good to revisit them sometimes. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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very smart
well done
maybe you’ll like to join my challenge
http://www.sylvain-landry.com/category/sl-week
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Wow – the color here is stunning! Really beautiful.
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Thank you. 🙂 It was a lovely day. The light on the water was gorgeous – unfortunately the pictures don’t actually do that justice! I’m glad you like it.
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