Friday Fictioneers: Elemental Inspiration

This is my entry for this week’s Friday Fictioneers Challenge run by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This week’s picture prompt was provided by Douglas M. MacIlroy. The challenge is to write a story within 100 words.

Photo Prompt - © Douglas M. MacIlroy

Photo Prompt – © Douglas M. MacIlroy

Elemental Inspiration

People travelled miles to see the sculptures, lauding her imagination. Cass simply smiled and accepted their praise, shrugging when asked the source of her inspiration. They wouldn’t believe the truth, anyway.

The creatures were everywhere.

Some curled amidst tree roots, slow and lazy. Others danced lithely on the breeze or flitted among flames. Her favourites were those that leapt through the waves, sleek and deadly. She watched them from the cliff’s edge as she pretended to gaze at the ocean – no one ever reacted well to tales of creatures visible only to her.

The doctor’s pills remained in the cabinet, untouched.

Word Count: 100

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76 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: Elemental Inspiration

  1. This is an excellent story! It truly shows what it might be like for those people with mental illnesses that refuse to take their medicine. I like the tension build up before getting to the plot twist!

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  2. Until the last line I was thinking maybe she was like Detective Burkhardt from “Grimm”, but now I’m left wondering. Is she seeing things because she’s ill and needs the tablets, or is she really seeing things and everyone else thinks she’s crazy and should be taking the tablets? She lives in a magical world in any case.
    Great story as always!

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    • I’ve never watched Grimm – which is quite strange because its exactly the type of programme I generally love! I’ll have to see if I can find it on Netflix or Amazon. 🙂
      I’m quite happy for the story to be interpreted either way (I like to add a bit of ambiguity every now and then) though I’m more drawn to the second option, myself.
      Thanks for visiting and I’m very glad you enjoyed it. 🙂


  3. If her psychosis isn’t a danger to herself or others, perhaps her pills should stay in the cupboard. I’ve seen schizophrenics’ harmless delusions knocked out of them by anti-psychotic medication, only to have them replaced with paranoid delusions accompanied by violence.
    Well written.

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  4. The twist ending was great! Well done!!!

    There is a fine line between creative genius and insanity. She seems to be living on that line…good for her atristic process, and good for those who enjoy her work, but perhaps not good for her physical and mental health.

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  5. Oooh, nice mystery; is she truly seeing the unseen or is she an unmedicated hallucinator. I love this sort of story – two interpretations.
    Well written, particularly the creatures ‘flitting, curling, dancing’ – nice, very visual.

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    • I wonder the same thing. Modern society has a very narrow concept of ‘normality’ and anything that deviates from it is labelled as ‘wrong’ and medicated to ‘correct’. Thanks for visiting. 🙂


  6. Great story. I think many interpretations of what we see can be valid. If she isn’t frightened by her visions, why shouldn’t she have them, as long as she can still live a good life independent of others. I really like how you describe her art and what she sees. Maybe being too normal sometimes puts people at a disadvantage, too.

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  7. No wonder her sculptures are realistic Great twist at the end. A bit scary that she’s lost touch with reality. I guess the medication would make her like everyone else, not special anymore, so she’s resisting it. Well done, Louise. 🙂 — Suzanne

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