FFfAW: A Mother’s Grief

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Photo prompt Β© Jade M. Wong

A Mother’s Grief

“We didn’t do anything to it, Ma,” Aeliene said, a waiver in her voice that broke Shylie’s heart all over again. “We were just playing. It came out of nowhere and attacked us. Baen tried to stop it, but, he… he fell… and… and…”

Shylie gathered her daughter close.

Grief encased her as she beheld the body of her butchered son, leaving her as fragile as eggshells. The slightest movement could cause her to shatter, spilling her emotions out for everyone to see. But beneath the sorrow, anger began to burn.

“Are we going to continue like this?” she demanded, turning to the rest of the tribe, gathered nearby in silent respect. “How many more children must we lose before we do something about these monsters?”

They might be pacifists by nature, but fire smouldered within each and every one of them. Her people spread their wings and gave a mighty roar.

Those puny humans wouldn’t stand a chance. Not now.

For the dragons were going to war.

Word count:Β 173

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This post is for Priceless Joy’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge. This week’s prompt was provided by Jade M. Wong. Thank you, Jade!

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22 Comments on “FFfAW: A Mother’s Grief

  1. Wooooowww…was not expecting that at the end! Great twist…totally caught me off guard. It says a lot about humanity too, what a great way to look at it!

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  2. Great take on this prompt! I was unsure of what was coming next when reading it and was quite surprised with the ending. Well done!

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  3. I love this Loiuse! I love the twist at the end! Quite a switch – human’s attacking dragons that have feelings! Great story!

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