This post is for the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) Challenge, run by Priceless Joy. The challenge is to write a story of 75-175 words inspired by the photo prompt below – this week provided by Sonya of Only 100 Words. I’d love to know what everyone thinks.

Dreams and Nightmares
The cell stood on the town’s outskirts: a warning to the inhabitants; a reminder of the power of the Overlords. Despite the rust on the supporting framework, the unusual alloy of the elevated cell remained untouched by the passage of years. Occasionally the sounds of banging and shouting, of screaming, could be heard from within, reducing in volume as days passed. No one had ever been seen approaching. No way into the cell had ever been found.
Wraedan had always lived in its shadow.
It had not always been there, however. His grandfather had whispered of a time before the tyrants came; a time when their land was free. Wrae had loved to listen to the stories. He’d dreamed of living in a world that didn’t thrive on fear and pain. When the Resistance had approached he hadn’t hesitated in joining them.
His dreams had now all turned to nightmares, enclosed in inescapable darkness. Defeat and terror sapped his strength; bloodied hands pounded in futility.
Tonight it would be his screams keeping the town awake.
Word Count: 175
Those damn Overlords, at it again. Resistance is futile!
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They’re always watching! Thanks for visiting, Emilio. 🙂
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Oh, wow, what a great take! Love it!
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Thanks, Angie. It was the first thought I had when I saw the prompt! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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Reminds me of Divergent or the Hunger Games. Except, the hero doesn’t conquer.
Great writing.
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Oh Louise the ending was so so unusual and left me wanting to read more…..great that you can do that to me…….well done….
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I really like this! The last line is wonderfully creepy.
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Wow! Excellent Louise! It is as if he is also trapped in that green cell. Maybe he is! Very powerful story.
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Great story! It would be fun to hear more about this world.
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Thank you, Ali. 🙂 You never know, I might revisit this world some time. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Fab take on the photo prompt, Louise! Great world-building 🙂
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Thanks, Sonya. 🙂 I’m glad you liked it.
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